Poetry On the margins of the First Draft #10

Poetry fragments on a vintage-style open book background with a raven and black cat illustration. The left page reads 'On the Margins of the First Draft' and features the website name 'ofstardustandthebeasts.com' in gothic script. The right page contains handwritten reflections about love, poetry, and the soul, with ink splatters across the parchment, creating a raw, emotional, Victorian-inspired aesthetic.

This piece from Margins of the First Draft captures the feeling of being completely undone by someone's presence. I wonder if I ever felt something like that or if it came from watching a certain movie....

(Authors Note)




10. Belladonna in her eyes

Like a maiden in love,

With my eyes glistening

In the lights above my head,

As if he was the belladonna to my pupils

I was a deer caught in headlights

And he was

The definition of poetry




Poetry on the Margins #10 Spellbound

Have you ever been completely undone by someone's presence?
He is like belladonna — the toxin that dilutes pupils —
deathly and intoxicating.
Oh, my poor little heartstrings.

Imagine this:
you live your life as a grown-up 21st-century woman —
you know how to hold a drill, gosh, some of us can even change a tire —
and there is this one person who makes you feel like a kid.

I wonder what kind of chemical reaction that is.
Dopamine rush? Loss of reason? Oxytocin?

Babe, help me, please —
I may have forgotten how to tie my shoes.

A vintage-style open book. The left page reads “On the margins of the First Draft” and features a raven and a cat by a candle and skulls. The right page says “Thank you for finding these words & staying for awhile. Please subscribe to be notified upon new arrivals” in a mix of elegant and handwritten fonts.

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