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Poetry On the margins of the First Draft #4

Poetry fragments on a vintage-style open book background with a raven and black cat illustration. The left page reads 'On the Margins of the First Draft' and features the website name 'ofstardustandthebeasts.com' in gothic script. The right page contains handwritten reflections about love, poetry, and the soul, with ink splatters across the parchment, creating a raw, emotional, Victorian-inspired aesthetic.

This piece is part of Margins of the First Draft — a collection of poetry and reflections on first love, memory, and the soul.
Sometimes, a glance says everything that poetry tries to capture.

(Authors Note)




4. “His Eyes” was her favourite poem

His eyes

If that was not poetry

Written in two words

I. Don’t. Do. Poetry




Poetry on the Margins #4 First memory

Do you remember your very first love?
Or an instance of meeting someone for the very first time?
Or meeting a pair of eyes as such,
depicted in this poem?

I wonder if a poem
could carry the whole essence of a person —
like their eyes do.

I remember my mother telling me
that the eyes are the windows to the soul.
No wonder every man in my life
had had a fabulous pair.

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A vintage-style open book. The left page reads “On the margins of the First Draft” and features a raven and a cat by a candle and skulls. The right page says “Thank you for finding these words & staying for awhile. Please subscribe to be notified upon new arrivals” in a mix of elegant and handwritten fonts.

Links to more of my work:

If you like reading an emotionally packed short story here you can find multiple of them: Six-Sentence Stories, Short Stories, Romance and All That, Dead Poet

And a brand new addition to my poetry tab: On the margins of the First Draft

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