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Poetry On the margins of the First Draft #13

Poetry fragments on a vintage-style open book background with a raven and black cat illustration. The left page reads 'On the Margins of the First Draft' and features the website name 'ofstardustandthebeasts.com' in gothic script. The right page contains handwritten reflections about love, poetry, and the soul, with ink splatters across the parchment, creating a raw, emotional, Victorian-inspired aesthetic.

Part of my poetry and reflections project, Margins of the First Draft — a piece about feeling deeply, carrying small childhood truths, and turning them into honest writing.

(Authors Note)




13. Foolish girl

My foolish heart,

Like my mothers favorite vase

Plummeting from the shelf I could not reach

And beneath my feet

A thousand tiny shards

With my tears, flowing from my eyes

My love, a runoff I was drowning in

My mothers’ arms around my shaking, frail, husk

“All is going to be alright my child”




Poetry on the Margins #13 Tiny Hands, Heavy Heart

My own mother always told me —
whenever I told her that my hands are so tiny (which they really are) —
that my heart is full.

My father figure told me
I was floating, someplace far away,
not really here.

But being here was a tad bit painful,
and I guess I always felt every ache
very deeply.

I feel honoured and blessed
to be able to write about it —
in a way it still feels honest
and raw.

A vintage-style open book. The left page reads “On the margins of the First Draft” and features a raven and a cat by a candle and skulls. The right page says “Thank you for finding these words & staying for awhile. Please subscribe to be notified upon new arrivals” in a mix of elegant and handwritten fonts.

Links to more of my work:

If you like reading stories: Six-Sentence Stories, Short Stories, Romance and All That, Dead Poet

Or poetry : On the margins of the First Draft

and more reflections than poetry: On the Margins of the Second Draft

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