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Six-Sentence Story #2 (With Prompt Word)

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I wanted to post this one warm and raw. This week’s six-sentence story feels more like a poem, and I was afraid that if I sat with it any longer, I’d over-refine it into something it isn’t. So it’s a bit of a crossbreed... an experiment for the blog hop or something like that...

The weekly writing challenge is hosted by GirlieOnTheEdge, and you can find links to other participants’ work through the link-up.

Rules of the hop:
Write 6 sentences. No more. No less.
Use the current week’s prompt word.
The link is live from Wednesday at 6:00 PM until late Saturday night.
Spread the word and support fellow writers!

PROMPT WORD: MARCH

Six-Sentence Story - Blackbird

I was touched by a chirping bird with its wings tied behind its back, and for the first time in life I could smell spring without my throat closing up.

In my delusions, I had hoped that I could catch this magnificent creature, make it drink from a cup on my windowsill, and snatch it for myself.

Who knows, perhaps I could even teach it human tongue.

However, beside its tunes, my poetry felt like humming a note I couldn’t hold without losing my breath.

Maybe I was getting increasingly bonkers, expecting a bird to talk to me, “chirp-chirp” I would go, “chirp-chirp, come in now,” but the bird wouldn’t even look at me.

And in time I learned to sit on the windowsill, watching it march away with its beak still in my chest, whispering “chirp-chirp, come in now” to something that had no desire to know me.

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Links to more of my work:

If you like reading stories: Six-Sentence Stories, Short Stories, Romance and All That, Dead Poet

Or poetry : On the margins of the First Draft and On the Margins of the Second Draft

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5 Comments

  1. violet

    You may get more satisfactory results by untying its wings… hehehe

    Reply
  2. clark

    quietly effective* Six!

    *or engaging or… hell, kinda evocative

    Reply
    • of Stardust and the Beasts

      Yes, the bird was the one being evocative. I guess you can’t shower beautiful things with admiration and lock them up after all.

      Reply

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