
I wanted to post this one warm and raw. This week’s six-sentence story feels more like a poem, and I was afraid that if I sat with it any longer, I’d over-refine it into something it isn’t. So it’s a bit of a crossbreed... an experiment for the blog hop or something like that...
The weekly writing challenge is hosted by GirlieOnTheEdge, and you can find links to other participants’ work through the link-up.
Rules of the hop:
Write 6 sentences. No more. No less.
Use the current week’s prompt word.
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PROMPT WORD: MARCH
Six-Sentence Story - Blackbird
I was touched by a chirping bird with its wings tied behind its back, and for the first time in life I could smell spring without my throat closing up.
In my delusions, I had hoped that I could catch this magnificent creature, make it drink from a cup on my windowsill, and snatch it for myself.
Who knows, perhaps I could even teach it human tongue.
However, beside its tunes, my poetry felt like humming a note I couldn’t hold without losing my breath.
Maybe I was getting increasingly bonkers, expecting a bird to talk to me, “chirp-chirp” I would go, “chirp-chirp, come in now,” but the bird wouldn’t even look at me.
And in time I learned to sit on the windowsill, watching it march away with its beak still in my chest, whispering “chirp-chirp, come in now” to something that had no desire to know me.

Links to more of my work:
If you like reading stories: Six-Sentence Stories, Short Stories, Romance and All That, Dead Poet
Or poetry : On the margins of the First Draft and On the Margins of the Second Draft
My band "Chaos in Spring" can be listened to on YouTube, Spotify and other streaming services.

You may get more satisfactory results by untying its wings… hehehe
😂😂😂😂 I never thought about it. 🧐 🧐
quietly effective* Six!
*or engaging or… hell, kinda evocative
Yes, the bird was the one being evocative. I guess you can’t shower beautiful things with admiration and lock them up after all.
Oh and thank you so much Clark, it was very sweet of you ❤️