Poetry On the margins of the First Draft #15 | Desperation

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Part of my poetry collection, Margins of the First Draft—I know how this poem was written. This one I remember: I was listening to an Egyptian singer, and I was struck by how he conveyed obsessive love. I wanted to borrow that style, because it was so strong and somehow unhinged that I wanted something like it in my own writing.

(Authors Note)




Desperation

What is the worth of my love

If I can not paint the city walls

With the colour of his eyes




Poetry on the Margins #15 The Worth of My Love

It's the writer’s ache —
to immortalize this feeling of admiration,
desperation, longing, ache.

Whatever you wanna call it — it is.

Otherwise, what was this feeling worth?
If I can't create from it,
grow with it,
carry it with me,
remember it...

Did it even
exist?

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