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Poetry On the margins of the First Draft #16

Poetry fragments on a vintage-style open book background with a raven and black cat illustration. The left page reads 'On the Margins of the First Draft' and features the website name 'ofstardustandthebeasts.com' in gothic script. The right page contains handwritten reflections about love, poetry, and the soul, with ink splatters across the parchment, creating a raw, emotional, Victorian-inspired aesthetic.

Part of my poetry collection, Margins of the First Draft — a reflection on how heartbreak can turn into melodrama, art, and a little wild beauty through emotional writing.

(Authors Note)




16.For love to let her go

Oh Dear Lord

At this state,

A knife

Straight into this heart of mine

Would be an act of mercy




Poetry on the Margins #16 Melodrama

This poem makes me want to melodramatically lay on my way-too-modern couch,
with a bottle of red Zinfandel in one hand and a knife in the other,
and bathe myself — and a beautiful wedding gown — in fake blood.

And then,
maybe,
have a picture painted of me.

Sir,
can you paint me
like one of your
French girls?

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A vintage-style open book. The left page reads “On the margins of the First Draft” and features a raven and a cat by a candle and skulls. The right page says “Thank you for finding these words & staying for awhile. Please subscribe to be notified upon new arrivals” in a mix of elegant and handwritten fonts.

Links to more of my work:

If you like reading an emotionally packed short story here you can find multiple of them: Six-Sentence Stories, Short Stories, Romance and All That, Dead Poet

And a brand new addition to my poetry tab: On the margins of the First Draft

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